Twilight: My American Dream
These are hard times, people. Really, really hard times. My dad lost his job, my mom’s career is on the brink, and both of my parents have resorted to stealing tricycles from toddlers and selling them on eBay for extra income. Ok, the last one isn’t true, but you get the idea.
Now what can I, an infamously lazy teenager, do to help my family in these days of doom? I’ve been pondering this for a while, and I think I’ve hit upon a brilliant solution. This is how it goes: I will write an incredibly crappy romance novel featuring mythical creatures that hitherto have been considered undesirable and/or weird as hell, but with my help will soon be considered the height of schmexiness. I will fill aforementioned novel chock full of misplaced adjectives, the ideological equivalents of passing gas, and lots of glitter. And I will proceed to sell millions of copies of my heinous novel to unsuspecting (or suspecting) American teenagers under the pseudonym Killjoy Lawrence. In other words, I will follow in the admirable footsteps of Stephanie Meyer.
I think a few more details will be illuminating as to how I will carry out this monumental task. Character #1, whom I shall lyrically dub Faint Echo, will be known solely by the fact that a) she narrates the story, and b) in personality, she closely resembles a white crayon – by which I mean to say, I could color her over every scene and still the only thing visible about her would be her fanatical infatuation with an unlikely love interest. If anyone views this character depiction as wrongly one-dimensional, I’ll have you know that Faint reads Emily Dickinson poems and fancies herself a reclusive genius. At some point in the plot she will throw her Dickinson books and her dreams of genius out the window in order to be with her fanatical infatuation.
Which brings me to Character #2, also known as Mr. Studly, an individual who lives to be unbearably good-looking and plot-servingly mysterious. In case you still feel a little unclear as to his role in the book, this should help you out: he also happens to be staggeringly sexy, magnificently muscular, seductively shiny, glitteringly gorgeous, Stonehenge-ingly statuesque, bodaciously beautiful, preposterously perfect, and filamentously, fortuitously, fragrantly frothy. Yes, frothy. He will probably act like a total douchebag towards Faint Echo throughout the book, but we couldn’t care less because we keep forgetting she exists in the first place.
The other characters in the book don’t really matter. You and I both know that the crowning achievement of this literary endeavor will amount to getting #1 and #2 into one another’s arms and, um, bodily cavities (nevermind the fact that #2’s body cavities are the only ones you give a damn about). If there are other characters at all they will merely serve to distract the lovers from their creepy, obsessive bliss long enough to extend the book to three hundred pages. Furthermore, they’ll give me a chance to populate my semi-mystical world with inexplicably warped versions of fantastical beings. You want werewolves? I give you…a troupe of cheerleaders that morph into flying poodles on the summer solstice!
I was also going to discuss the not-so-subtle ideological bent of my creation, but the concepts are so insidious and downright stupid that I thought I’d spare myself the embarrassment for now and just let you pick them apart later. Unless someone thinks I can get away with a digression on Marxist conceptions of consumer culture-–and maybe a short one on literature and the postmodern consciousness? Maybe? Ok, I’m thinking that’s a no.
I happen to have one major predicament with this project, other than the whole selling-my-soul-to-the-devil conundrum. I have no idea what sort of mythical creature Ed—er, make that Mr. Studly–-should be. For copyright reasons, vampires are obviously off of the list. Werewolves too. Dragons are a bit too scaly to be the schmexiest of the schmexy. Gnomes always seem to be old men in pointy hats—and while this wouldn’t stop the brave, stereotype-busting Ms. Meyer from conceiving of them as aging sex gods with beards that turn to fireballs in the event of a snowstorm, some of us can’t get away with such epic revisions of mythical identities.
In keeping with stereotypes, dwarves apparently have really bad manners (not to mention breath), and therefore would not at all fit the character of abusive, pathologically insane, but oh-so-dazzlingly-delectable boyfriend-to-be. Anything with elves will brand me as unoriginal even before people decide to read my decidedly unoriginal book. If I choose to create a leading male character that doubles as a fairy I will risk challenging traditional gender roles far too blatantly for the parameters my disgustingly traditional novel. I can’t be subversive unless, you know, I’m being subversive in an idiotic and meaningless way. And, to top off the list of available mythical creatures, wizards are so passé!
What I need from you, dear reader, are suggestions. What sort of special should Mr. Studly be? Dig deep. But not too deep. If I’m going to save my family from total financial crash-and-burn before the end of the year, I need to be armed with some pretty shallow material.
Tagged as American Dream, Economic Crisis, Recession, Twilight, Ty, Writing.Comment
By Reggie
on Mar 3, 01:31 AM
Make him a Heliopath. Get it? Because he’d be like, hot.
By SlyShy
on Mar 3, 02:08 AM
You’ll have to make him a demon, because your fans will love the conflicted bad-boy type.
By The Drunk Fox
on Mar 3, 02:18 AM
I was thinking the same thing, SlyShy.
By Kitty
on Mar 3, 02:37 AM
Fukken lol.
By Ari
on Mar 3, 02:45 AM
Some sort of hybrid..bird…something. Have conflicted insticts and stuff. Yeaaah.
By SlyShy
on Mar 3, 02:47 AM
As it turns out, it kind of sounds like this novel will actually happen.
The title is Sich Schnappen Maleficarum.
By Ty
on Mar 3, 02:51 AM
Copyright it, Sly! Copyright it RIGHT NOW or Mr.-soon-to-named-other-than-Studly will dissolve you into a puddle of Sich Schnappen by way of creepy Maleficarum gorgeousness!
By SlyShy
on Mar 3, 02:57 AM
Also, first person to figure out where the title comes from has apparently really good language skills.
By Crystal
on Mar 3, 03:28 AM
Ty, I cannot wait to see this novel. The only thing it’s missing is llamas (assuming this is the Ty I know…sorry in advance if the joke was moot).
By SlyShy
on Mar 3, 03:35 AM
Yes, the llama joke was not a horrible faux pas here, have no worries.
By OverlordDan
on Mar 3, 08:00 AM
I would just like to be on record as saying:
Best. Gnomes. Evar.
By elvesrule
on Mar 3, 08:40 AM
Mr. Studly should totally be an elf, if you want more variation you could make him a fire elf, water elf, space elf, dark elf or an any adjective you can think of elf!
I can’t phantom why you didn’t think of this yourself!!!
By Lucywannabe
on Mar 3, 09:27 AM
Bwahahaha!
Ohhhh, I know—make him a Selkie. They’re supposed to be hot in order to seduce human females (that way we can have endless descriptions of his manliness), so he could be all angsty about his existence because he doesn’t want to tear her to shreds after knocking her up but it’s in his biology and OMG HE’S SO CONFLICTED. Oh, and also, the smex would be hot.
There you go. Another really good mythos to bastardize! :D
By Puppet
on Mar 3, 09:34 AM
What kind of sport do they play in the rain?
By Juniper
on Mar 3, 09:46 AM
This is a great idea, Ty. I wish you luck.
As far as a game in the rain, they could all play golf. It has endless possibilities for glamorizing, action sequences and money shots. (In case they make your book into a movie.) :P
By Juniper
on Mar 3, 09:48 AM
Sorry about the double post, but you could make Ch #2 half troll or something. I’ve seen that before.
By WiseWillow
on Mar 3, 11:07 AM
Ooh, I know! Make him a centaur! That way we have him never wearing a shirt (so you can describe his fantastic pecs and ripped abs every time he appears), and feeling horribly, horribly conflicted because, #1 is HUMAN. He’s part HORSE (and horses don’t wear clothes, so his…erm…equipment would be readily visible). Oh, the wangst! But in times of danger, #1 can hop on his back and he carries her away to safety! And of course, at some point we’ll have to have some mysterious, never heard of before, ancient lost potion that can make him a human so he can live with his twue wuv. And then there shall be badly/barely described awkward honeymoon sex. With exploding pillows.
By Eragon'sShrink19
on Mar 3, 03:00 PM
“You’ll have to make him a demon, because your fans will love the conflicted bad-boy type.”
-Slyshy
Oh yeah, that’d be great. You can make him like, the the devil’s son and have her give up her soul to go out with him. That’d be like, perfect.
By Reggie
on Mar 3, 05:59 PM
To Grab of Witches? I think you might mean Maleficae (the nominative plural for witch), but you’re playing on Malleus Maleficarum?
Congratulations, son, you just got not-a-math-major’d. MaleficIs Amorem Efficat!
By Artimaeus
on Mar 3, 08:11 PM
Or rather, make him a fallen angel. It’s like a demon, but your moral message can be even more pretentious. Or maybe an Esper, just cause they’re cool (and vague enough to do whatever you want with ‘em).
By Moonehs
on Mar 3, 08:23 PM
Zomigawd, this is the best! I try to explain to my friends why Twilight is such a terrible example of American lit, but they don’t get it. They read this, and were like ‘What is this shit?’. When I let them read the first two paragraphs, they proceded to beat me with their spikes (note: you should never piss off XC and Track girls. I am one of them, and I know from experience)
By RisenDemon
on Mar 3, 08:41 PM
Just so that you could claim that you were being original, you could make the male the uninteresting character and the super-sexy character could be a female fairy.
By Ty
on Mar 3, 09:23 PM
Dammit, people, these suggestions are TOO awesome. I’ll have to write fifty bestselling novels now, and then my family will be filthy rich and everything will suck in a filthy rich sort of way!
Although, with that much money, I could just send you all a bunch of stimulus checks. I could send the whole nation stimulus checks! And everyone would be happy!
Maybe a better policy would just be to create a Twi-parody Writing Project on II? Allocation of labor ftw!
And yes, I realize I use far too many exclamation points.
By Dan Locke
on Mar 4, 10:30 AM
Yeah, demon or dark elf. Like Edward Cullen, but replacing blood-sucking with even more general wangstyness.
Also, I’ll have you know that I already came up with half-trolls. They were a crossbreed of trolls and elves called Trelves.
By ScribblingSara
on Mar 4, 01:08 PM
Why not a dragon? One that can transform into a human, and is the only of its kind that would treat humans with warm feelings. There are of course other dragons around that also looks like humans, but don’t like them and DEFINITELY don’t like one of them mingle with a human girl:P
Eh, morphing dragons would be an interesting idea – if I cut the romance
By Snow White Queen
on Mar 4, 07:50 PM
I think you should make him a demigod. That way, he’ll be hot, and totally ungettable.
By Snarf
on Mar 5, 01:09 AM
Go with bigfoot. Very manly.
By Snarf
on Mar 5, 01:11 AM
No. Wait.
Time traveling viking warriors.
http://www.sandrahill.net/
By Ty
on Mar 5, 01:22 AM
I’m ashamed to say that that video elicited an utterly valley-girlish reaction from me. It went something like this:
OMG. LOL. Like OH MY F-ING GOD. THIS IS THE MOST F-ING HILARIOUS THING I HAVE EVER SEEN IN MY LIFE!
Hm. Maybe it wasn’t necessary for me to share that. But…yeah. I now <3 time traveling viking warriors and I’m certain that some day, one will be the father of my children.
By SlyShy
on Mar 5, 01:42 AM
Those videos are so bad, and I actually watched all of them. I could feel what was left of my sanity. Slipping away. I never thought. I’d miss it. No I can’t. Think any. More. Damn. . . .
But, seriously, I want to make fun of those videos, but the pure wtfs/minute are through the roof. I’ve never seen such concentrated stupid in a single video before. I’m absolutely floored.
By Snarf
on Mar 5, 10:25 AM
The thing is, in this case the author realizes it’s fucking ridiculous. I think the videos are half parody, half advertisement.
By Juniper
on Mar 5, 02:45 PM
That video is great. It’s so absolutely stupid that it couldn’t possibly be mocked. It is it’s own mockery.
By lookingforme
on Mar 5, 04:20 PM
Hehehe…selling your soul to the devil indeed. But it is for a good cause!
I personally would vote for the demon idea. Or the centaur idea (lovely descriptions of his rippling six-pack would be in order there). But whatever you do—make it really REALLY bad, because that, apparently, is what sells.
By Thebazilly
on Mar 7, 09:24 PM
Hi. First time commenting, but I’ve been reading the articles here for a while.
Anyway.
Going with the demon idea, why don’t you make Character #2 a succubus?
By Lookingforme
on Mar 11, 05:41 PM
Forgive my ignorance, but what’s a succubus?
No offense, but I don’t think that having TWO mythical creatures would work, because then you couldn’t write about the (really ANNOYING!) inferiority complex the human partner has.
By Corsair
on Mar 16, 07:41 PM
Okay, I have a couple suggestions.
Aes Sidhe – they’re renowned for being total bastards. More commonly called Fairies.
Djinn – Again, typically assholes.
By sakuuya
on Apr 16, 04:16 PM
Looking, a succubus is a sex demon, basically. They look like hot women, and they tempt mortals. I think the male equivalent is an incubus, but I’m not totally sure on that one.
By Latticino
on May 10, 07:02 PM
Hi. First time commenting here.
Why not make him an imp?
btw, my name refers to a type of glass, not fancy coffee.
By Steph
on May 16, 01:41 AM
Edward IS an incubus. No, wait, sorry, a vampire. No, wait, WHAT?
Props to Smeyer for messing her legends up.
By Danielle
on Jun 1, 03:15 PM
Although I like the whole demon idea, I think I have a better one:
A DOL employee.
Think about it! They’re usually rude, snotty, not helpful at ALL, and they take your picture before you’re ready so you look like a mentally challenged hippo on your driver’s license—in other words, PURE EVIL. But if Mr. Studly were an intern at the DOL place who ends up falling for Faint Echo when she comes in to take her driver’s test…. it would be so romantic! Plenty of opportunities for purple prose about how that zit on his chin made him look like Steve Martin. And since DOL rules mandate he make the subject look as awful as possible in their photo, he could show his love for her by skirting around that rule and putting a picture of himself on her license so that even if she doesn’t look like herself, she’ll still look heartbreakingly sexy.
It’s a love story for the ages.
By SMARTALIENQT
on Jun 7, 07:29 PM
Sich Schnappen Maleficarum™
— SlyShy · Mar 3, 01:56 AM ·
Also, first person to figure out where the title comes from has apparently really good language skills.
— SlyShy · Mar 3, 01:57 AM ·
Itself Snapping Witches?
I take German, and Google just gave me The Hammer of Witches for Malleus Maleficarum, as in the witch hunter’s manual.
By SlyShy
on Jun 7, 07:41 PM
Well, it turns out the joke we thought we can up was entirely incorrect. We thought it would be “Nailing Witches”, which is both a pun on “The Hammer of Witches” and also a reference to the witch that gets, erm, nailed.
By Anonymous
on Jul 7, 02:37 AM
Make Mr. Studly a hippogrinfth. Just a suggestion. Fill in your reasons here. Or you could make him a… Phoenix!? haha. Maybe a Sphinx, or a Siren, Kraken, Pegasus, Elemental creature, the list goes on and on… Oh maybe you could make up your own!
By lizzie
on Aug 29, 02:04 PM
MERMAID. Seriously, that’d be awesome.
By Snow White Queen
on Aug 29, 04:55 PM
Haha, the mermaid problem could be a significant factor.
By Casper
on Feb 1, 05:06 PM
“conceiving of [gnomes] as aging sex gods with beards that turn to fireballs in the event of a snowstorm..”
YES. DO IT. OMG. |:
By Kloof
on Apr 18, 04:36 PM
Mr. Studly.
That’s great XD